Bubbles

I'm not that great at poetry but it's fun to write!

Bubbles

Iridescent shapes
up, up, and away.
Twisting, turning,
mesmerizing beauty.
Pop!

Reviews

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Haha, damn cute :D I like the innocence of it all in this piece. Seriously it's refreshing to read poetry like this. My minds always clouded with such sad and troubling stuff, Sadie really does make people smile :)

[Sadiesmiles]

Thank you so much!

[Sami Khalil]

I use to love to do those bubbles in my younger days and watch them pop...A very good poem...:).........................