Let me bare myself

Let me bare myself to you so that you can see who I am.
Let me embrace the shallow part of you that slowly creeps away.

Hold me tonight and just be there for me in sight.
Empty the glass which holds my tears.
Listen to my thoughts as we wave goodbye to today.

Paint my heart with your insecure thoughts.
And I'll watch you grow a little more sincere.
Show me to you vacant heart and I will fill it whole.

Let your pain be a fading memory.
We can watch it float by together while we sip our cups dry.

Hold me today so that I know where I stand in you.
Don't hold back because of unrealistic judgments.

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Good! Exceptionally good. you have written it quite spontaneously here. i dont see any signs of editing. i had to read it thrice to understand the interconnection between the lines and the whole context but then i stand thoroughly impressed. it is quite meaningful.

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Hold me today so that I know where I stand in you.
Don't hold back because of unrealistic judgments.

I love these lines here.
This is an emotional write here.
I like this. So well expressed.