Sweet Jealousy

Oh jealously

Oh jealousy! Sweet jealousy,
I never knew where you come from.

For the person you never thought of,
Here I stand to resist, but failed.

While these string plays,
I am lost because of you.

I know I am committed,
But this sweetness is not for her.

Oh jealousy! Sweet jealousy,
Here I stand confused today.

Where should I lay my head,
Okay I am confused today.

You create a war zone,
I dont know where to fall upon.

I rest my head today,
where I am fooled away?

Oh jealousy! Sweet jealousy.
I dont feel right today,
I dont feel right today.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Mr. Mills]

When you have jealously you also know you have feelings toward the person that you are jealous of. Just watch the punctuation for poetry like this. Usually when it's in stanza's you don't want to have periods. You want comma's and question marks to separate some things though. This represents the feeling well.

[sabinn]

thank you very much and i will look forward to what you have reviewed and surely will try to make better. thank you very much. Appreciated :)
:)

[Karmee]

This is really good, I could hear this as song lyrics.

[sabinn]

thank you very much :)