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Have you seen me the way I have seen you!

The wonder that has been built through.

Built through the dream, illusion and a mystery...

One day this story is gonna make a history.

There is a path that has been created.

A step of dream that has been melted.

Like a day dream been broken!

Hold your step and take a deep breath,

I have seen the dark day, but that smile brightens up the night.

Grab your seat belt and get ready for a ride,

Its your heart that plays the part.

Clear your path and the heart line, my love

Don’t worry one day what heart wants, words will surely define.

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The start and so the last...loved reading it!
The explanation you're giving gives a satisfactory to the reader...at least for me!
Thanks for sharing...enjoyed reading it☺!

[Coyote Poetry]

I liked your thoughts and your logic about love.
"Its your heart that plays the part.
Clear your path and the heart line, my love
Don’t worry one day what heart wants, words will surely define."
The above lines. Needed journey into love and to know hope. Thank you sabinn for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[sabinn]

Thank you very much

[Coyote Poetry]

You are welcome.

[OneAmongstMany]

Beautifully written, lovely use of repetition throughout. Keep it up!

"I have seen the dark day, but that smile brightens up the night" - loved that line especially!

[sabinn]

thank you so much that you liked my work and surely will try to make a better one in future

[pia]

I love this poem...its so well written !!
It has a nice flow to it and each word carries significance and emotion

[sabinn]

thank you soo much

[Wajiha Nayeem]

after long i have seen you here...but the poetry was amazing...and i did miss your work!

[sabinn]

been busy lately.... and really thankful that you like my work :)

[Wajiha Nayeem]

okay....welcome!