Blue Angel

Mythical Girls # 7

I'm exhuasted, drained, running on empty

Wearing a path in the floor

 

Thinking of all these things

These things that I own

 

Wondering how

Thinking why?

But I never seem to make it

Much past that

Beyond all the questions

 

I feel myself spiraling down

Sitting like this

With my head against the dead wood table

 

Looking from this angle

Perusing my life

Debating oh what do I do?

With this life

 

Wondering if I'll make it

Wondering if I'll break it

In my time

 

Dreaming up how

Thinking of now

What do my words mean to you?

 

What dreams will I share with you?

Oh what do I do?

If you come right through

Oh what will I do

With my angel dressed in blue?

Author's Note

Original 2005

Reviews

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

The poem is a maelstrom of emotion. You have such a skill of using common language to convey your feelings. It seems to have just come out without through. that makes it come across as genuine and captures the readers mind as you earn their trust. Sweet work. It's difficult to speak candidly with such an impact.

[SarahCortland]

I really like this it is very relateable. I feel like I've lived in this emotion while I've been in pain. You did a beautiful job it had a nice flow :) 100/100

[LondonParis]

I love it, I like the way it flows and it's well just amazing.

[Sam Severn]

I'm TOTALLY digging these 2005 poems!!! They're fiery n' feisty li'l fuckers! Love the last verse, containing questions n' that killer final line, to the MAX! ㋡