You (2)

You,

Break through the iron bars of

thought

the tantilizing expression

Calling the sweet blood to my face

Giving way the locked intimacy within

 

You,

Show the world, what's between us

Stuck in tween our scattered thoughts

Our focused passion

The intangible, the untouchable

The forgetable

Imprint them in the sand of the earth

Displaying for the world

All of us to see

 

The withered dreams

brought to life

Rooted in a firm reality

Planted in the here and now

To grow

To blossom into our future

Feel with the sweet blood

 

I want those things remembered

Permanent etched

Carved into the brick

Imposing our world

To be remembered

After our bones are ash

Long buried beneath

That earthen sand

 

You,

Call me from within

You,

Bring this to the surface

Call up from the murky depths

My love

 

We will be remembered

We will not be forgotten

After we decay and live

Reviews

[Sam Severn]

WOW!! This s**t ROCKS!!! Best n' bravest poem of yers I've yet read, n' crafted with the most love, feels like. Propelled by the set-apart "You" lines, which stand alone like they'll be the only thing standing at the end of the world. Your ending verse brings the passion back down from the heavens to Earth, where you hammer a final line in that stuns me.....FABU-F*****G-TASTIC!!! ㋡