Pulse

This is something a little different from what i usually do. It's.....interesting to say the least.

Pulse, a pulse

Beat

Beat

Electric eyes, electric eyes

Shine

 

Rip out the heart of compassion

Bleed an angry rage

Breed your life

A soul for a soul

 

So they say

So test out the minds

Of those who follow

Weed the pests from the garden

Open wide

Reveal thine eyes

A gateway into a world

Unknown

 

Stars blaze

A cold wind blows

Through a black night

 

Beat

Beat

 

Cry for vengeance

A soul for a soul

Of course

 

Breathe

Burn your memory into my heart

Bleed your soul into mine

There forever

We intertwine

 

Call my name

Breathe my lips

A calm lull, after vengeance

I see a light, a passion

An end to my hatred

 

Weed my soul

For a perfect slice

Of eternal everlasting life

With you

 

Pulse, pulse

Beat, beat

For you my love

I overcome any feat

Beat

 

Beat……

 

Reviews

[Alexis Ortega]

*And now i know i can't retreat coz in your eyes I found defeat*

haha, Ditto.
Great job, I really liked this piece.
It kind of makes the reader feel like adding.
Major points for this one,
"Interesting" is an understatement!

[Rc R. Vagilidad]

and this defeat will never again repeat...sorry it just went off my tongue, i really got actualized with the rhyming in the last part. very nice flow, 5 stars for it.