Accusation

Woah profanity. This is written for someone who will probably never see it, and who wouldn't recognize that it was about them if they saw it.

"B***h!" I shout,
hiding in my ragged winter coat
while falling snow gently
mocks my allegations.
The band of lovers
breifly turns away from their summer games
to point and laugh.
As I shake my head in dissapointment,
they dance away,
blissfully ignorant of the demon in their midst.

Author's Note

The middle is missing something. What?

Reviews

[PerfectFlaw90]

Hmm. Well, if you really want to add onto it, I think you have all the basics there. Just maybe elaborate on what you already have. Otherwise the poem is great. I like the bit at the end about "the demon in their midst".

[KingPatwic]

nice poem i like the more sopohisticated words - but only one question how are you hiding in your winter coat when they are playing summer games ?