For Dad

Daddy issues.

He hates his life.
Nothing is good enough for him.
Between the curse words
and failed dreams,
Between the injustices
and impossible tasks,
I hang suspended from a thread
and he comes at me
like a pair of scissors.

Author's Note

I like this one. Do you like this one? Because I do.

Reviews

[No More]

Very well written. It hits me right in the heart.

[PerfectFlaw90]

This poem is really sad, but I love the honesty and simplicity. "I hang suspended from a thread
and he comes at me like a pair of scissors". One of those lines that are so clever you wish you had wrote them. Great poem.

[Weaza]

Aww, I really really liek this poem. Its sad but it grasps the reader, keep writing its very good ^_^