We all have Importance

So, this is a poem that is like an inspiration to keep going in life. Even when your shattered.


Somehow we must keep going,

Even as we feel we must stop,

Even as we feel unknowing,

Even with the heart’s continuous throb.

Because we are here for a reason,

To accomplish something others think impossible,

We are here to be something to become,

We are here to be something you may now think improbable.

So even as we are broken,

Even as we feel unimportant,

Even as we feel hopeless,
We must remember, we’re all supplied with importance. 


Reviews

[Criss ;)]

wow, what a great write, i loved this piece at night.......i'm glad to read this stuff. you know what you here putted a realness's of life, a real reality's of life, of time, of human to survive, you expressed here the importance of every human, that's here to live his/her life in his/her way as in whatever way he/she wants to.

i liked this much n moreover i loved this
So even as we are broken,

Even as we feel unimportant,

Even as we feel hopeless,
We must remember, we’re all supplied with importance. 

wow, what a great write, firstly i wanna appreciate your thoughts to write, you here well captured the reality, you expressed/described here about "IMPORTANCE" of every individual fella........

i can feel it, because whenever we feel sad, bad, hopeless, breakable from heart then we think "life has become a load", but this;s'nt a right solution to solve problem and your this write has well mentioned here.....you've already expressed that "We must remember, we’re all supplied with importance".......i loved this line....alot.

now as a suggestion i wanna say in your IInd stanza's 1st line "
Because we are put here for a reason"......i think you should have to cut this word "PUT" from this line, you can replace that one with this "because we're here for some reason"......i think you should gotta write this line at the place of that one........

sorry, my aim ain't to hurt your feelings and make you angry, just it's a suhestion, i loved this piece, so, i tried to help you....hope you'll do as i said.......but if i did hurt then "I apologise", for that suggestion....i',m sorry ......

anyway...i enjoyed this piece much....
have this from my heart for you 99.6 / 100 :)
have a nice writin'

take care.....!!

[luv2dream]

Don't be sorry at all. I actually love that suggestion and I just changed it. I really appreciate this comment and I cannot wait to see if you have poetry of your own to read. Thank you for the constructive help on this, I really appreciate it and thanks for reading.

[Criss ;)]

great to see that you didn't hurt by my suggestion, i'm glad to see that, now i can say,, you're a nice girl and if you'll accept such kinda little criticism's you'll be soon improve ...and i'd love to read yours........

yeah, i've ssen you've changes but i think you;ve forgotten to write this word "SOME" before this word "REASON"....you can add this, i'm syin' couse it'd b nice to read if you'll add this word......

it;s always my pleasure...... :)
great time :)