I Don't Know

I wrote this when i was 16, i was bored and lonely at that time. then after a month i made a melody for this. and it became my first song composition.

It is a gloomy day, i'm searching for something.

I don't understand i'm searching and searching for nothing.

Not-A-Thing that's it!

I'm searching for somebody,

But i don't know who it is, all i know is that i'm searching

for somebody that could make me laugh,

Make me feel that i am still alive

And can make my blood flows into my veins,

In other words, who could bring me some happiness.

Yes, maybe clown? but it's only for kids.

I'm young but i'm not a kid,

I'm young but my soul feels like i'm old.

Old and tired of everything.

I don't know, i hate this madness,

I hate this day, because it's dark.

There is no sunshine, there is no bright lights

And it is cold. The sky is going to cry,

A heavy raindrops but it did not..

-Myle Rent

2006

Author's Note

Thank you for reading, please leave a review or comment, i will deeply appreciate it. Thanks.

Reviews

[D.S. Patton]

I'm not a poet. Nevertheless, I think great writing lingers with you, touches you, and makes you feel. I really enjoyed your poem. It reminds me of those days when I feel empty, and I'm in search of something. I don't necessarily know what it is, but I know I'm devoid of something. Great job! :-)

[Myle Rent]

Thank you for your kind words Lotus bing :). I'm glad you like it.

[RAOrourke]

I can see this as a wonderful song! Very well done!

[Angad Waraich]

Well done piece.

Really liked the nothing part.
Though i get the feel old thing , maybe heavy
or damp or something of that sort .
But a nice poem overall.
Enjoyed it.
Thank you for sharing.

[Myle Rent]

Thank you for your Review Mr. Angad Waraich

[Angad Waraich]

Your most welcome!