That Lonely voice

That Lonely voice

A Poem by NotAproved
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Again and again, I hear it.

"
Alas, a lone voice calls out in my defense
Those words my only shield
Just another stain on their happiness
Every shadow another demon I'm not yet ready to illuminate
Lies still exist
 Untold dreams reveal themselves
Nightmares long to hide again
Crawling along with them, I call back to the lone voice
It's me

© 2016 NotAproved


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'a lone voice calls out in my defense............I call back to the lone voice
It's me'.

A nice read about self reflect? Maybe justifying a wrong? Either way it's a nice short read, that's easy to follow,a little dark, without completely depressing the reader, which is nice.

My only criticism, if you're interested is the reusing of the words defense and nightmares, but that's just me. I thought over all it was a very nice write.

Posted 8 Years Ago



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NotAproved
NotAproved

San Antonio, TX



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