A Weird Person I Met

    I met a weird person when I work in a convenience store. It was a very busy day. I and my fellow worker named Susan  were making coffee for customers. Suddenly, a man yelled at me" Where's the resume paper?" His voice so loud that I was frightened. I look at Susan because I didn't know where it is. Then Susan asked him what did he want again. He had a very bad temper and almost to hit Susan. Then, another partner came. I told what he wanted and she led him to get the resume paper. Beyond my expectation, he went out the door so quickly without paying money. He was a thief! We told our shopkeeper and she said it didn't matter. She'll called 110. I had never been this situation before. That man really impressed me a  lot.

Reviews

[Vic]

This is a well contained short story. Some constructive criticism is that you shouldn't have to tell me how anyone feels, you can show me. For example, instead of saying that "His voice so loud that I was frightened," you could say something like "his booming voice echoed through the store, causing everyone around him to flinch in fear." (Idk, you could probably do better, this is just an example of what I mean).

[Rruiyun]

thank you for your reviews
It's very helpful to me

[LostTrinity]

My goodness! Sounds like a far fetched and creative method to steal? Impressive on my perspective, not so good on his reputation :).

[WoodenChair]

i did not see that coming!