Prologue

   Colder and colder I got as I lie on the floor of my small closet sized bedroom. I don't know when or why everything went wrong, but whatever it was led up to this. I began to shiver as the heat from my body left faster than the crimson liquid stained the carpeting. A tear slid down my face as I began to think about what I had done, about what everyone would think about me when I was found... About the promise I made to my friends... Memories flooded my mind as I began to fade out, but one stuck with me. It was the promise I made to my best friend -- "I swear... I'll never give up... I'll never leave you alone..."

 

Author's Note

Enjoy, and comment well!

Reviews

[Sleepless]

awesome ! agree with reviews they have more to say than me :P i like this you describe wel the seting and the emotuion i defiently want to continue :P

[Raya Avans]

Wonderful start, defiantly makes me want to continue you on. Impeccable imagery, beautiful. Well done :)

~ rae

[TL Boehm]

oh, nice hook here.

[A.D. Wilson]

Great way to grab my attention. I have to know what happens next!

[Bailey C. Writing]

This was great, and only the prologue! It sounds like something I would pick up in a bookstore and buy :) Reading on!

[Luchia Noname]

wow i love this it was amazing :) i cant wait to read more ^^

[DearSweetAgony]

WOW
If you put more thought into it this would be an awesome story.
Yeah,this would be an EPIC story.
Write More!
XD

[Shay]

i really makes me want to read more and what will happen next. please write more!

[qaralynn]

nice!! I totally love it

[Chris]

Haha, I usually avoid books.
There are very few I'll read, this is going to be one of them it seems