I Make Believe

I’ll take no hesitations

In this world that is ever changing

I’ll keep my head held up high.

 

And in my dreams I’ll have no indecisions

Because, you see, in this life that is the impossible.

I’ll keep on moving through anything that comes my way.

 

I wish I could pretend to live out my dreams.

But make-believe is no fulfillment

To what I wish I could believe in.

Reviews

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Nice Poem. I like the contrast between what is ideal and what is reality.
I also liked the way you got lost in the dreams, but you found reality more
rewarding. There is wisdom in the words. You have a lesson to teach, but
you do so in a way that tricks the reader into not knowing they are learning
philosophy. Nice!

[melissa]

wonderful:)

[Kaitlin]

WOW this is amazing. again...how do you think like this?

[Levioshock]

excellent

[loverly9316]

good poem

[Dutch Jr.]

Good, strong words here. Impossible is nothing...

[An owl on the moon]

There is such a beautiful determination that you share, confident and strong. So wonderfully written and inspiring.

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I thought this was a good poem. I enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Adelia Alighieri]

This reflects so much from such a young mind. Great job.

[Daydreamer54]

Wow this was great! When i read it, it reminded me of brick by boring brick - by paramore which the story indicates how it's better to live in reality then fantasy. :) Great job with this!

[Abhinav]

Lovved it!
was very very colorful and the words were excellent:)
liked the middle three lines the most