Connected

meh.. I don't know. writers block as of now.. **Thanks for the title idea, friends!**

As this moment in time passes us by, we are so far away, yet our hearts lie next to each other.
The miles distance our physical states, but as far as emotionally; we will be connected-forever.
And I know, from the bottom of my heart, that this could be real.

And once I wake up from my twisted dream, I can begin to sort out the puzzle; coming back to the real reality.

Reviews

[Hippy]

i like your work its all real nice but id like it better if you cut it up in diffrent lines itd make it smoother to read and i thikn helps with the flow

As this moment in time
passes us by,
we are so far away,
yet our hearts lie next to each other.
The miles distance our physical states,
but as far as emotionally;
we will be connected-forever.
And I know,
from the bottom of my heart,
that this could be real.

And once I wake up from my twisted dream,
I can begin to sort out the puzzle;
coming back to the real reality.

Thats how i would cut it up maby even a few more places but its your art do as you please with it

[Kaitlin]

i love this. wow dont you just hate reality! haha and yea i believe that we will be connected forever. just saying

[A.M. Everlasting]

This was really sweet, and so very true. No matter how far away loved ones can be, they're somehow always right next to you emotionally. This is especially true of people we've lost. Thanks for sharing! :)

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

This poem brings back a vivid memory. I sat with friends half way across the world and as we stared up into the stars, one spoke of how he missed "her" and how they couldn't "even look up at the same sky."

This poem really touched me.

[kayla garcia]

i love it

[Thomas Fleet]

I can really relate to this poem...I'm sort of in a situation similar to this.
It's real heartfelt. :}
Thank you for sharing...and I'll be reading more.

[Becca*Type2012]

Awww! That was a really sweet poem. It reminds me of mycurrent boyfriend Ryan. We dont get to see each other all that much, but we still love each other the same. I think it should either be titled "Connected" or "Connection."

[Angie Diane♥&hea..]

I liked it. It showed good emotion. I think it should be called "Connected".