10 word poem contest

10 word poem contest

A Poem by Rachael

You will never know how you are killing my soul.

© 2010 Rachael


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This is nice. I feel like that everyday. My friend does that to me. He has apologized to me so many times that I don't think I can forgive him anymore. I know when he isn't talking to me he misses me. He doesn't deserve me love or friendship when he is slowly eating away at me like he does all the time. He has always been like that though. He is 14 or 15 I really don't know. He depends on me way to much and I'm tired of it. I liked it though. It is really great. I just love how I can connect with it considering it is good. Being in this situation really helps me to see that I shouldn't have friends like that. I do, but I just got to let them go because it slowly is killing me. :) I loved it. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.




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This is nice. I feel like that everyday. My friend does that to me. He has apologized to me so many times that I don't think I can forgive him anymore. I know when he isn't talking to me he misses me. He doesn't deserve me love or friendship when he is slowly eating away at me like he does all the time. He has always been like that though. He is 14 or 15 I really don't know. He depends on me way to much and I'm tired of it. I liked it though. It is really great. I just love how I can connect with it considering it is good. Being in this situation really helps me to see that I shouldn't have friends like that. I do, but I just got to let them go because it slowly is killing me. :) I loved it. Thanks for sharing.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

I've never really understood the point of these kinds of poems, but I really like this one. Its interesting and cool.

Posted 14 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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Added on January 17, 2010
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Rachael
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