Set Me Free

Just kind of experimenting with haikus. they all are except one.. hope you like it!

I finally see

That this love will never be

Because you and me.

 

There are so many

Way too many differences

Between you and me.

 

I would love to stop

Believing that I love

You make it too hard.

 

The feelings inside

They refuse to stop growing

My heart beats for freedom.

 

I don’t want my heart

To continue skipping beats

When I see your face.

 

I want this to end.

All emotions swept away

Into nothingness.

 

Reviews

[Zeitgeist Manifesto]

Wow. Each one of these tiny poems could be a story of their own. I love the way they all create this great synergy. I like the way you collected your thoughts.

[Kaitlin]

This is an absolutely perfect poem.
Your so good at expressing your emotions.
Flawless

[Chamil3001]

I Agree, Loved this.. great piece of work..
You have done well..
Josh

[Deepshikha]

I.love.this.
End of discussion.
You've got a wonderful flow going here, and I didn't catch anything wrong with the haiku. [: