Loneliness

Loneliness

A Poem by Rachael
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Not sure if it's done...ideas? comments? (picture is New Eddystone Rock, in Alaska)

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I need someone in my life,

someone more than just a friend.

It's so lonely here without a person to hold on to.

And I'm dying inside

It gets so hard to just; to just open my eyes and see

What this world has layed out in front of me

I would take it and show my friends

If I could get a glimpse of what it truely is

To just know, know whats inside and understand how this life came to be

Following the set ideas of popularity makes it difficult to surpass; day by day.

© 2009 Rachael


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Story of my life

Posted 14 Years Ago


Aw, Rach, I know so much how you feel!
I don't think it's so much the 'popularity' you speak of though, but the arrogance/beefjerkyness of most guys I know. =/

Posted 15 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.


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