View Through a Car Window

View Through a Car Window

A Poem by Rachael

 

  The moon shines,

 

bright and full through the haze,

 

stars but a dot in comparison,

As the moon hangs above the mountain's horizon..

© 2009 Rachael


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Joe
I liked the imagery in, "The moon shines, bright and full through the haze." Great job! It was somewhat unclear to me what you meant by the third line, but I enjoyed the poem.

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