Love?

Love?

A Poem by February Kapusniak

Sometimes I don't understand,
Is life suppose to be this way?
But I then suddenly remember,
you'll always be there to make it better.

I know I shouldn't,
but it's frequent.
When I wonder if it's true,
or if I didn't see it through.

Baby don't you see,
I need to know,
do you love me,
or am I just loco?

© 2010 February Kapusniak


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Great love poem. Most of the ones I've written, well, they suck. That's why they aren't posted :)

I love the last stanza. No particular reason why, I just really like it.

Keep up the poetry, February (I laughed again typing your name :)

100/100

~Shayna Reed

Posted 14 Years Ago


An excellent perspective on love. Not many people look past the honeymoon stage or the breakup stage. I think you mean "Supposed to be". A wonderful poem.

Posted 14 Years Ago


0 of 1 people found this review constructive.

great poem. This is good poetry and I like the way you look at love in general, like you kind of question it. keep writing.


Posted 14 Years Ago



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