The First Sign

The First Sign

A Chapter by February Kapusniak
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I'm sorry to say I helped start this.

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            I'm sorry to say I did help start this. And if I had known what would have happened I would have never accepted what had been offered. It all started like this...

            My eyes slowly begin to open as I realize I did it again solely from the fact of my spanish teacher yelling "venga sobre vosotros algo de diecisiete años de edad mocosa ésta es la tercera vez este débil que ha dormido en mi clase y he terminado con ella." as I awaken I try to say that I'm sorry it wont happen again but it comes out something like "Lo siento por usted huele como una colilla y la espe..." My eyes slowly begin to drift away from the spanish words and my head slowly falls onto the school model iDesk, a multi-purpose touch screen desk...
              When I awoke I was in a very uncomfortable position on a cushioned wood chair in a very familiar room, with pictures of small children filling in any free space on the large desk in the center of the room. Even though I was only half awake I knew exactly where I was, the principal's office. As I begin to become more vigilant of my surroundings I realize my old iPod touch 6G was sitting on the large desk next to a holograph reading MR.GRAZWELL, my hood is off, and my wireless earbuds lay next to my iPod.
              Mr.Grazwell says,"Asleep in spanish class, you had your hood on, and you were listening to your iPod, I hope you see the problem here."
              I respond with "Yeah I understand, so what is it another extended day?"
              "Well with that attitude,"he says "Maybe I'll be keeping this," he holds up my iPod.
              "Why?" I say trying to hold back my anger.
              "Oh come on you know why or you will" He says in a creepy voice that sounded like the devil or something. But what really freaked me out was his mouth begins foaming and he fell to the ground and rolled up into a ball like a dog.
               "What the Hell" I yell then the vice principal and like five assistants run into the room.
                One yells "Call the cops, someone call the cops!"       
      


© 2010 February Kapusniak


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when u go over the spanish words it shows a translation :) that was helpful :)

Posted 14 Years Ago


Interesting. It sounds like it's written from experience with a little future added in. You used a spanish translator on the internet, right because vosotros has been out of use for about a decade. Other than that, you set up an interesting scenario.

Posted 14 Years Ago


I like the voice in this story. I can tell the narrator is going to be an interesting character. I like the ending, too.

Posted 14 Years Ago


This is good and no I'm not just saying that I'd go on but you already know what I think...jerk lol

Posted 14 Years Ago



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