I Cant Save You

you have to save yourself

i cant save you

i can't save you when your kicking and screaming

i can't keep you warm when you refuse my coat

i can't make you see clearly when you keep pouring bleach into your eyes

i can't make you care when you dont

but i can try

Reviews

[Pete]

so true. i like this a lot. very deep & heartfelt. reminds me of, "Salvation lies within." from the movie The Shawshank Redemption. great write. thanks for sharing ... :)

[Rylee David]

I love that movie.
And your welcome! thanks for the feedback =)

[Cherrie]

What a helpless feeling this is. With all of our ideas and efforts what we try is only as effective as their willingness to receive.
A powerful piece.

[Rylee David]

Thank you so much, I appreciate it!

[¿]

Well we're madr for ourselves...a common thing comes in my mind while reading bout self care is...the one who can't love himself/herself let alone loving others...and that's not in selfish way...Well expressed☺

[Rylee David]

thank you