Hold Onto

Hold Onto

A Poem by Rylee David
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Needing someone to be there

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hold onto
all i want is someone to hold onto
someone to push away
someone who will always come right back
someone who will hold my hand

someone who will stay by my side even when i'm screaming
someone who will save me, even if all i want is to drown
someone who will only stand silent 
even when i hold a gun to their head

someone who will hold me every night

even when i have nothing left for them to hold onto

© 2018 Rylee David


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A specific wish when nothing seems to be going right or a deep feeling of having lack of someone special in life is whised here in your poem...lovely thought is this - hold onto!! Nice read..keep writing😊!

Posted 6 Years Ago


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Rylee David

6 Years Ago

Thank you!
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6 Years Ago

You're heartedly welcome😊!
You're a narcopath. It's not a good thing.

Your writing's pretty good though. Most or us tend to share that trait.

Posted 6 Years Ago


Rylee David

6 Years Ago

Thank you for complementing my writing
Davidgeo

6 Years Ago

Thank you for writing something worth complementing

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