Hold Onto

Needing someone to be there

hold onto

all i want is someone to hold onto

someone to push away

someone who will always come right back

someone who will hold my hand

someone who will stay by my side even when i'm screaming

someone who will save me, even if all i want is to drown

someone who will only stand silent 

even when i hold a gun to their head

someone who will hold me every night

even when i have nothing left for them to hold onto

Reviews

[A.G.]

This poem is very beautiful and meaningful. I get this type of love you are describing. Great write (:

[Rylee David]

Thank you!😊

[Re-Pete]

i like the honest way you think and the emotion that comes through in your words and imagery. you express it in a powerful, effective way. good write ... :)

[Rylee David]

Thank you so much!

[Kelly Scheppers]

This reminded me of the song "Drive" by the Cars. I hope you have that someone in your life. Nice to meet you, Rylee. Pretty name!

[Rylee David]

Thank you, and its nice to meet you too.

[A.G.]

Welcome (:
You too

[TonightWeDine]

This poem is quite a good example of an imperfect relationship, but the love stays strong for each other. It's understandable from your point of view, when it comes to wanting someone to be there for you, but that someone hasn't shown up yet. The situation can become chaotic, but in the end that someone will possibly show up when you least expect it. Thank you for sharing this! :)

[Rylee David]

Your very welcome, and thank you for the feedback!

[Chris Shaw]

That need to have someone can be so strong. I felt the emotion in your lines.

Chris

[Rylee David]

thank you!

[Chris Shaw]

You are welcome Rylee David

[Ariana Omnomnom]

Wow that took a real dark turn at the end. Good read, just hoping you don't hold guns to anyone's head for real.

[Rylee David]

Thank you 😊

[KCthelastboyscout]

I wrote something similar to this a long while back.its basically the same topic.companionship.the need to have " somebody".well written.a relatable story for everyone to read

[Rylee David]

Thank you so much for your feedback!! I really appreciate it

[Levi Levin]

There's special ground out there for every flower to bloom in. You did a great job!

[Rylee David]

Thank you!

[Levi Levin]

Your welcome!

[Akash gaikwad]

Raw and deep emotional poem. Kinda makes my heart ache especially how important it is to have people in our life. Thank you for this amazing poetry.

[Rylee David]

Thank you so much

[Just Kim]

This is really good, full of emotions.
Very nicely expressed.

[Rylee David]

Thank you, I appreciate it!