A Sestina About ItselfA Poem by Mike MelansonThis is a "sestina". In mine, each stanza is a different point of view.I. I know, it's just a bit cliche, but think of something else to do that isn't too "risque" or done. It says that it's a poem about itself before it starts, so take it as it is or leave it be. I write with common words, but paint an off-beat scene. II. I'm not too much for poems, I mean, I've seen a few before, so, yeah, I guess I think it's good. I'll tell ya what, I coudln't write like that. If I were you I'd send it to a magazine or something. Why not take a shot? C'mon. You know I like your poems. III. I feel you've missed the point. With poems, it's how, not what, you say to set the scene. A scent. A trope. A metaphor. Partake of ripened words! Embellish what you think with tailored rhymes, designer lines, into costumes of prestige! Why mimic speech to write? IV. We cannot use your piece, it's not quite right for what we need, I mean, who still reads poems that you know of? Moreover, buys them too? It couldn't fetch a dime, and boy, I've seen, oh, quite a few. And usually, I think "Hey, this might do," but <i>this</i>, I couldn't take. V. Comma splices, fragments, too many too's to take. Contractions too. Where'd you learn to write? A concept goes so far, why must you think that cleverness and wit are traits that poems must always have? Sometimes, familiar scenes, familiar ways, can serve a purpose too. VI. We do have rules and regulations as to what we allow (we're snobs you know). We take so much of each, so much already seen. Like Shakespeare's plays, why imitate? Why write when it's been done? Though mimicry may help a poem, it's not as easy as you'd hope to think. VII. "A Poem About Itself" just isn't right, I'd say. So take another look into its lines. I think you'll see another scene.
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