loving you

love poem

since when i was twelve
i always want you to make believe
that my feelings for you is really true
and my heart is only for you

i always see you in my dreams
i am always with you in my thoughts
i cant sleep thinking of you
and all your memories make me feel out of the blue

Author's Note

needs to review/suggestions

Reviews

[Dani The Unreviewed]

Very nicely done:) i could get the feel of it. i give a hundred points for this piece:) one mistake thats been poking my eyes: " my feelings for you is" perhaps try 'are' instead of 'is' just a suggestion, but all in all, you did great:)