That girl ...

A short sweet but heart touching poem !

A boy from the glass
Staring back at the girl standing ,
Eyes full of love :
The one who deserves him is the luckiest ...
Pouring his heart he said "behold me fr the rest of your life ! "
She was full of tears
Because she was the girl !!

Reviews

[Rahul]

It's always hard to a girl to follow her heart, may be, cos her mind's so overwhelmed with something that infatuates her spirit to its pleasure. Faith's something that a girl wants, but always wonders if she really gonna get this or not .. so i guess, it's really a very touching, & heartfelt poetry you've come across, & written deep down in such simplistic words. Very short yet so effective to be read. Worth reading poetry it is. Emotionally whirled around.

Looking forward to reading your work, Ruth.

[Rutvi_poetess]

Thank you thank you again ...well who can understand this even after being a girl !

[Rahul]

Seemed, you passin' or just passed throu' a very rough period of time in life... is it?

[Rutvi_poetess]

Nope that's not te case ...I love to read the mindset of other people and I imagine a lot ....that's doesn't mean it's my life !

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

Beautiful story, with just enough imagery! Beautiful. Thanks for sharing. :)

[Rutvi_poetess]

Well yeah thank you .,,I will work upon "imagery"

[Cyprian Van Dyke]

I wasn't saying that your imagery wasn't good. By "just enough," i meant perfect. :)

[Rutvi_poetess]

Yeah ty :)