The Cost of Shadows

The Cost of Shadows

A Poem by rutherford

 

Like burning suns in space

we leave lights on

when we're not there

because darkness

would dominate

better to fend off

mysteries

of Rembrandt shadows

until your father says

to an empty room

"what are we made of...money?!"

and flips the switch.

© 2015 rutherford


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this is so comical...my dad used to say that very thing...but then, yes, darkness can really scare us...and those shadows call us like demons...better to leave at least one light on...
sort of like self-protection when we have been hurt in love...we leave that one light on for protection..that guard we put up...so we don't walk into a dark room and suffer more pain, unexpectedly....

what is our heart made of?

love the metaphor...

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

rutherford

8 Years Ago

Thanks Jacob. I appreciate the time you take in your reviews. Nice to hear.
rutherford

8 Years Ago

PS, I'm erratic in my contributions but you are always dedicated in reviewing my work. Thanks
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this is so comical...my dad used to say that very thing...but then, yes, darkness can really scare us...and those shadows call us like demons...better to leave at least one light on...
sort of like self-protection when we have been hurt in love...we leave that one light on for protection..that guard we put up...so we don't walk into a dark room and suffer more pain, unexpectedly....

what is our heart made of?

love the metaphor...

Posted 8 Years Ago


1 of 1 people found this review constructive.

rutherford

8 Years Ago

Thanks Jacob. I appreciate the time you take in your reviews. Nice to hear.
rutherford

8 Years Ago

PS, I'm erratic in my contributions but you are always dedicated in reviewing my work. Thanks
.. read more

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