Everyone should have a backyard at least once in life You can dig to China Play badminton Tend to your hydrangeas Pitch a tent and camp out with your best friend
Mow a lawn Sun bathe with a cool drink and if you wait long enough watch the stars and galaxies reveal themselves You can rake leaves and send them back into the sky
by bonfire And if you ever dig all the way to China you could end up in someone's backyard.
Didn't have my own backyard in the city, but my grandparents had a half acre that was exactly the kind of bliss your poem describes. You took me back there, John, and I'd rather be there than China any day...
Posted 10 Years Ago
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10 Years Ago
Glad you liked it. I have a memory of being 6 o 7 and digging a hole in my back yard and telling my.. read moreGlad you liked it. I have a memory of being 6 o 7 and digging a hole in my back yard and telling my father i was digging to china.
did all that when i was kid...didn't have a backyard in NY...apartment building, fifth floor...a park across the street...but in Illinois...we had a nice backyard ....you brought it all back...helped me relive my youth...although i never quite got to China...and when i was a kid, we didn't have FM radio then.
did almost get to alaska though...built an igloo in my back yard that i could almost stand up in...up near chicago we had some pretty deep snows.
i love this poem...
Posted 10 Years Ago
10 Years Ago
jacob--glad i could take you back to the memory in illinois. very cool about the igloo. neighbors.. read morejacob--glad i could take you back to the memory in illinois. very cool about the igloo. neighbors build one in their FRONT yard this winter. I actually did think i could did to china when i was about six. thanks for reviewing.
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