INDEFINITE KNOWING

A suspect

monk

waits in an alley

for a message

that does

not come

Reviews

[Michael G. Smith]

I saw his bones in a heap next to an empty cup and a weather beaten book. Merry Christmas.

[Rita L. Sev]

Hmm... a monk likely leads a very simple life - what some might consider a "small" life. They pray and wait for salvation, in their narrow alley of existence... This is an intriguing image, John, one that I will be pondering all night...

[Latifa]

a syspect monk
intriguing line

[jacob erin-cilberto]

i think isolating ourselves totally is a not a good thing...of course the message won't come...

we are in isolation--no touch from another...

this also could be looking for answers from god...expecting actual answers...

we ask questions in our time...god answers in his time.

[Pryde Foltz]

Who is this monk and why is he looking for meaning in alleys?

[rutherford]

I'm not sure. Lately I've had a few images or snatches of scenes in my head that I wanted to share and nothing more--perhaps the reader add the story to the image.

[Pryde Foltz]

I think I was trying to be silly. No, I got where you were going with this.

[rutherford]

the limitations of digital expression didn't allow me to know this for certain. i should know better but hard to read a mood from just written words. thanks for review.

[Pryde Foltz]

With me; go with silly.

[rutherford]

then we should align nicely. my default