STORE HOURS

Is this the hour
when my heart stops
and we close up shop

Reviews

[Joyce S. Greene]

I think I'd pop a nitroglycerin tablet soon, if I were you, rutherford, Or quick, call 911! This is certainly not the time to be writing a soliloquy about death! But seriously, this is a poem that leaves your reader with lots of dreaming room. Great job!

[rutherford]

thanks Joyce and no need to worry. I'm not closing up shop for a long long while. I was in a phase of really short poems and liked the sound of stop and shop together (i also think a supermarket chain in the Northeast. Best

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Rutherford - Again a touch of a verse...Good to read your work…Thanks for the invite to read your thoughts to paper at Writers Café...I'm back to work with copy writer and doing my best to write 1000 words a day...and a subject you do not get to choose...will be busy the next few months...so I will read all RR"s might just take a bit longer to get a review...hope you understand...plus promote my book: The Onyx - Vena Amoris...for late next month release…I have very little time on my hands…making the most of everyday and taking today to read as many as I can…keep writing and sharing your creative talent here and elsewhere…

[Azure Montessa (Blue)]

Your pieces are always intriguing in nature. Good job! ;)

[Pryde Foltz]

I sure hope note. Loved the way this piece said it without saying it.

[Rita L. Sev]

Endings lead to beginnings... but turning the lock is never easy. Profound in its simplicity, John.

[OTownPete]

This is a point that no one wants to reach in a challenged relationship. Your friend in words, Pete

[Michael G. Smith]

I like this poetic tribute to the notion of death, for some a mysterious concept for others another state of being.

[Tam Warink]

Oh, my... well, let's hope not! (addendum referendum innuendo compendium)