ASK THE HELP DESK

Park of my current theme on digital life

My processor needs a core capacity

set to imaginations of Beethoven and Botticelli.

Reformat the Operating System

to run on the collective soul of humanity.  

I’ll need a search engine

that provides results from all parallel universes.

Expanded memory capacity for

all space and time.  

Connect the router

to the mind of God.  

A webcam that records

all dreams 

With external back-up for everything.  

Author's Note

Wouldn't mind some suggestions on how the closing my be improved.

Reviews

[Tam Warink]

Rutherford, "park my...?" ~ Improvements are subjective, qualitative, irrational, mystical, probabilistic and abstract. I suggest an explanation that suggests, ever so daintily that, for every internal front-down there is an external back-up; craft it like an optionally enforced law of sentient maleficence.

[Rita L. Sev]

I think the ending fits well. Back up for everything - we worry about losing a piece of information that we will never need again, yet there are some things that are better forgotten... Backup for everything is almost ominous...

[rutherford]

Rita,
Thanks for the input.

[Pryde Foltz]

"If I only had a brain..." I liked this piece a lot. You bring the work world so seamlessly into the world of poetry.

[jacob erin-cilberto]

no...don't change it..that is a perfect ending...because of the digital age we are so worried about back up...but technology has replaced too many real things in our lives...we have become machines that need "back up"---that is a perfect ending.

[rutherford]

Thanks you Jacob.

[Glen Yumang Manese]

WELL PUT IN THE LINES...I THINK YOU WILL NEED A MAGNETIC FIELD SHIELD IN THERE...JUST IN CASE THE SUN DECIDES TO TURN YOU A CURVE BALL WITH A SOLAR FLARE...THEN YOU'RE WIPED OUT...SYNTAX ERROR...