UPPER PLATFORM, ROSSLYN METRO STATIONA Poem by rutherfordOne of a series of poems about my commute. I'm not satisfied with the final two lines so welcome some critical comments. I wanted to convey an irrational positive feeling for that moment.De-training on the upper platform commuters sprintfrom the downward escalator Their broken formations rush toward the closing doors of the Orange Linewith the same desperation as Greeks storming the walls of Troy My escalator’s steady ascent toward the lightconverges with three beautiful women who descend opposite like the daughters of Demeter assigned to the Underworld. I could be as Orpheus and rescue them but they don't seem to need rescuing and for that matter I'm not much with a lyre Instead, today is the day when I break the surface enter into the light to buy that winning lottery ticket. © 2014 rutherfordFeatured Review
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