Desolation

Desolation

A Poem by rutherford

Bag flaps in bare tree

white wire hanger in dark closet

frontiers of sadness

© 2013 rutherford


Compartment 114
Compartment 114
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An intriguing image put into this piece. I would recommend making it longer next time so as to allow the reader more time to get in depth with it.

Posted 11 Years Ago


rutherford

11 Years Ago

Thanks Ezekiel. It's written as a haiku so it's only 17 syllables.
Desolation shows in many ways... Great write, so much said in three lines...

Posted 11 Years Ago


They are alone. Nice symbolic write.

Posted 11 Years Ago


rutherford

11 Years Ago

This was during my "plastic grocery bag period." Appreciate the read.
Pryde Foltz

11 Years Ago

Hahahahahaha

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