THE HOUSE AT NIGHT

Short poem

The House at night

Reminds of how it was to be a child

When everything was safe and secure

A small light in the kitchen

The hum of the dishwasher

The House is at peace

    its done it duty for the day.

Reviews

[Glen Yumang Manese]

Seems you do your best to make this in a relatively small amount of words to envision the piece and take us to the meaning of the read...especially with the word arrangement with those two lines:

The House at night
The House is at peace

Thanks for the invite...I'm back to work with copy writer and doing my best to write 1000 words a day...and a subject you do not get to choose...will be busy the next few months...so I will read all RR"s might just take a bit longer to get a review...hope you understand...plus promote my book: The Onyx - Vena Amoris...

[Tam Warink]

...much like life on a deep space vessel. There's always the hum of the equipment, the air flowing from the scrubbers; especially the air flow. I've heard that if it stops then everyone is awakened from even the most sound and peaceful sleep... sleep, sleep, peaceful sleep.