The Wild Rambling Cottage Forte

Catch a glimpse of my mind !!!

Come sit here awhile

Take a stroll into my dream

Sit under the pergola

Hanging heavy with wisteria

 

Can you see the roses

Wild and carefree

Heavy with perfume

Teasing the window pane

 

Come lets run up the cobbled path

To the back stable type door

So so cosy looking

Overhung by vines and more

 

Mmmmmm smell that, delicious

My homemade bread cooking

Slip in awhile, sit at my pine table

We can chat over  a pot of tea

 

The bread is now ready, hot,

I will spread butter and then honey

What about some freshly baked?

Oat and raisin cookies, yummy

 

My Aga is recessed in the hearth

The kitchen is unique, Nic naks

With little window panes

Framed with gingham curtains

 

Look look at my living room

Heavy Beams, open fire

Big chunky fur rug, get some coal

The flames are running low

 

Quick we must leave.

The latch on the front door

Has just gone, run, run !

One day, that will be me

 

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Reviews

[Mark]

I'm brought into this cosey home and suddenly running out the back door gee... I hope you get to stay awhile next time! :)

[Bewitching Sensations]

once i find it .. i will stay for life :))))

[kublakhan27]

Very pretty piece...your house certainly sounds like a home^^

[Bewitching Sensations]

my dream place :)

[kublakhan27]

:)

[Jetta Zippora]

Very beautiful. A sweeping and serene write. Love it, friend. :) Breathtaking imagery.

[Mic]

Such a tranquil setting. Warm, soothing visit. Then a reality check in the last stanza. Hope you find your dream.

Well done.

[lee von cleef]

To sneak in to a place ,tip over a chair of the three bears, From A double wide ,I hope it is a heart that makes a home ,because I feel I will now always be up side down.
Decomposition, Lighting a fire of joy out of my losses because in those I am rich.

[Hester Vane]

Great mix of music and language.

[Pratik]

Lovely poem... It makes you appreciate the warmth and bliss of your family and home..

[Bewitching Sensations]

i appreciate your review Aaran :)

[Forest Green]

Beautiful marriage of words to music, brought together by an imagination and blue memories...

Nicely melancholy...

[Bewitching Sensations]

I take a bow... kind sir x Thankyou kindly

[mandy]

i loved the word description! i felt like i could see it all, and smell the flowers,,,and the homemade bread, wonderful poem..

[Bewitching Sensations]

Mandy thankyou so much x x x

[Sarah G.]

A really nice poem. Loved the way you worded it. :)

[Bewitching Sensations]

sarah i appreciate your review .. x x x

[Sarah G.]

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