The Wild Rambling Cottage Forte

Catch a glimpse of my mind !!!

Come sit here awhile

Take a stroll into my dream

Sit under the pergola

Hanging heavy with wisteria

 

Can you see the roses

Wild and carefree

Heavy with perfume

Teasing the window pane

 

Come lets run up the cobbled path

To the back stable type door

So so cosy looking

Overhung by vines and more

 

Mmmmmm smell that, delicious

My homemade bread cooking

Slip in awhile, sit at my pine table

We can chat over  a pot of tea

 

The bread is now ready, hot,

I will spread butter and then honey

What about some freshly baked?

Oat and raisin cookies, yummy

 

My Aga is recessed in the hearth

The kitchen is unique, Nic naks

With little window panes

Framed with gingham curtains

 

Look look at my living room

Heavy Beams, open fire

Big chunky fur rug, get some coal

The flames are running low

 

Quick we must leave.

The latch on the front door

Has just gone, run, run !

One day, that will be me

 

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Reviews

[Shay]

nice imagery thanks for sharing

[Ahmad Cox]

Very sweet and beautiful scene

[Bewitching Sensations]

thanks x x

[Gary H]

This is very sweet and wishful. There's a mixture of innocence and realisation, I mean, you know what you want but how do you get there? Or have you been there? This dream should, could be real.

[Bewitching Sensations]

Gary my dearest friend.. How have you been ? .. Missed you x x this was written years ago.. :)

[Shubham's View]

I love this poem! For some reason it pleases the mind to a great extent and simply (for lack of better words) makes me happy and joyous!! Beautiful write!

[Bewitching Sensations]

thanks for your comment x

[David Scott]

Nice dream you shared here. I was smiling the whole time I read it and the music was fitting. One day... Loved it. A lot of what you write is just so soothing. Like being held by a tender lover. Playful and light. Thanks again for the read.
Be well.

[Bewitching Sensations]

awww thankyou :))

[JW Edwards]

Very descriptive! Nice work :)

[Bewitching Sensations]

thankyou x

[Coyote Poetry]

Good description took me to an nice place. I could smell the bread and taste the honey. I like the music. Gave the poem a peaceful feel. Nice to have memories of beautiful and safe places. Thank you for sharing the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Bewitching Sensations]

thankyou for your review :))

[The Refined Poet]

this is so nice. I love the images your words created in my mind, thoughts of a peaceful home... nicely done.

[Bewitching Sensations]

thankyou so much xx

[Nicky Sarti]

Amazing, as always hun.
I am walking up that path and following where you've laid your written path.
What I would not give to have the ability to write like you!
I feel the same things, but it all comes out wrong.
That and the fact I am afraid of those who mean something to me, (or more than likely, that have been written about) reading my words and being offended.

[Bewitching Sensations]

thanks babe x

[Nicky Sarti]

Always meant x