I heard you cry ! Please dont die!

Dan a twenty year old family member. Turmoil as he lays in a coma fighting for life.. turmoil for him and those around during Christmas 2012

Dan i know you cant hear me!
But your subconscious is discerning,
Only 20 yrs old, a mere fledgling.
The terror and pain, so harrowing.

As the bike lost control.
Such pain and hysteria.
I pray that you recover,
As you lay in a deep coma.

Your body is fighting for life.
Christmas is no more longer,
Your laying there so still.
As angels keep watch, No war!

Unseen angels surround you,
Keeping watch, holding your hand.
No fear as they talk to you.
Time has stopped its hand.

Our hearts are full of hope.
We love and cherish you so much.
And need you to live fully!
Fight Dan ! Don't perish!

There are dreams to fulfill,
Yes the journey may be long.
But you will get through,
With a smile and a uplifting song.

So hold on, let the healing take place.
Soon you will be with those close by,
Who hold you close to their hearts.
We just need you to know, Don't die!

Author's Note

All positive thoughts goes out to Dan to fight to make a full recovery - And hope he pulls through....

Reviews

[kayakerandcamper]

Did Dan survive? and go on to make a full recovery x

[Mark]

Great poem and tribute. I hope Dan pulled through?

[Bewitching Sensations]

Yes he did.. thanks for asking xx

[Gary H]

If he can feel the hearfelt passion you have put into this, I'm sure he will feel better. Are you able to show him yet? I hope so as your words have so much meaning x

[Bewitching Sensations]

He has just come home ;-) thank you for your concern x

[Gary H]

He's lucky to have such a nice lady to be concerned for him x

[Mr Dunne Poetry]

Wow, what a lovely piece of poetry. I love the positivity. My thoughts go out to Dan.

[Bewitching Sensations]

Thankyou he is still not out of the woods yet.. and has lasting damage, but thankyou so so much...

[Mr Dunne Poetry]

Oh, I'm so sorry to hear that. I hope things improve. You are more than welcome :)

[Coyote Poetry]

I hope Dan is doing well. A positive and hopeful poem. We must stand with and show support to the people we care for. Thank you for the excellent poem.
Coyote

[Bewitching Sensations]

Thankyou for your positive thoughts Coyote

[Shay]

all my thoughts go to Dan and his recovery!

[Bewitching Sensations]

Thankyou x

[Michael G.]

No review, just thoughts and prayers sent. (Lee Von Cleef has asked his own angel to help.)

[Bewitching Sensations]

Thankyou x

[lee von cleef]

Life is a balance , as little as a prayer, the beauty of a soft kiss on the back of a hand,Courtney reach, out hold his hand, hold him still, let the world rest, let love do what love does best. give all the love of his heart,Love.

[Bewitching Sensations]

Thankyou thats lovely x

[de_maruf]

beautiful

[Bewitching Sensations]

thanks x