Eyes fleeting linger - Anam Cara !

Eyes fleeting linger.. what takes place?

You are rushing, in such a hurry.
That appointment you cant miss!
Scrambling in bag for your phone,
The flustered call, not at your best.

Then the world stands still,
Your eyes lock for a split second
Movement moves deep within.
Your auras collide, A God send.

Feeling naked, peaceful and trusting,
Two souls begin to flow together.
Conjuring a deep unique bond,
Anam acara is formed forever.

You may never see them again.
But in that second, a soul friend.
Never to be forgotten, an awakening,
Such awareness, What a blend !

Someone from the previous life,
A lover, friend or even a warrior.
A child, uncle or partner gone on,
For that moment a sweet flavour.

Peace returns as you ponder,
Such a chance magical meeting.
Amid a hectic dramatic moment
Still in shock from how fleeting..

Reviews

[Cerise]

wooow amazingly written the whole story..very well done..

[Bewitching Sensations]

Fancyfati thankyou so much :)

[David Scott]

You are my "anam acara" today dear friend!
Transformation and rebirth. Invisable becomes tangable.
Well penned!

[Bewitching Sensations]

:) why thankyou.. you are so kind....

[Pratik]

Wow! what a coincidence! Chance meeting and deja vu! My last poem is something along similar lines.. you can check it out (http://www.writerscafe.org/writing/Aaran123/1044555/)

This is a very well composed poem. It perfectly brings out the magic in the moments.

"You may never see them again.
But in that second, a soul friend.
Never to be forgotten, an awakening,

My favorite lines. You have paid enormous attention to detail out the intricacies of these moments. A superb write :)

[Bewitching Sensations]

Thankyou Aaran can you send me a read request on that please :)

[Chris]

Touched and touching...

[Bewitching Sensations]

Chris thankyou xx

[Dr. Wood ?]

I doubt it will ever be explained..the human mind is a powerful beast indeed..It has always seemed to me to be the ultimate enigma that our brain cannot work our brain out

[Bewitching Sensations]

yes but i will never give up trying :)

[Michael G.]

A bond without the bond is a bond nonetheless. Excellent thought. I really enjoyed the flow and movement of this.

[Bewitching Sensations]

Thankyou Michael :)

[Mic]

Deja vu... know not the whats nor whys, but a comforting moment nonetheless.

Well done.

[Bewitching Sensations]

thankyou x

[Coyote Poetry]

Good to stop and enjoy the moment. I like the situation in the poem. Sometime we are lucky. We are slowed down at a good time.
"Never to be forgotten, an awakening,
Such awareness, What a blend !'
Thank you for the excellent poetry.
Coyote

[Bewitching Sensations]

thankyou Coyote :)