Eyes fleeting linger - Anam Cara !
A Poem by
Bewitching Sensations
Eyes fleeting linger.. what takes place?
You are rushing, in such a hurry. That appointment you cant miss! Scrambling in bag for your phone, The flustered call, not at your best. Then the world stands still, Your eyes lock for a split second Movement moves deep within. Your auras collide, A God send. Feeling naked, peaceful and trusting, Two souls begin to flow together. Conjuring a deep unique bond, Anam acara is formed forever. You may never see them again. But in that second, a soul friend. Never to be forgotten, an awakening, Such awareness, What a blend ! Someone from the previous life, A lover, friend or even a warrior. A child, uncle or partner gone on, For that moment a sweet flavour. Peace returns as you ponder, Such a chance magical meeting. Amid a hectic dramatic moment Still in shock from how fleeting..
© 2012 Bewitching Sensations
Reviews
Gorgeous, passionate write. :)
Posted 12 Years Ago
12 Years Ago
thankyou Jetta :)
I like this a lot, i too have had moments like these in my life. I enjoyed this little treat for sure. Thank you.
Posted 12 Years Ago
I like this a lot, i too have had moments like these in my life. I enjoyed this little treat for sure. Thank you.
12 Years Ago
thankyou patrick x
A very concise assessment of those fleeting moments and the ecstasy that lingers in their aftermath...well done^^
Posted 12 Years Ago
A very concise assessment of those fleeting moments and the ecstasy that lingers in their aftermath...well done^^
12 Years Ago
Thanks Kub x
12 Years Ago
No problem^^
that was great, i have experienced fleeting moments like that,,,the pictures added a lot also.
Posted 12 Years Ago
that was great, i have experienced fleeting moments like that,,,the pictures added a lot also.
12 Years Ago
Thankyou.. precious moments
I've had moments of recognition like this... Very nice poem. ;)
Posted 12 Years Ago
I've had moments of recognition like this... Very nice poem. ;)
12 Years Ago
yes there are unique and memorable.. for a moment in time brings a glow to our soul ;
Hells bells...
That was... wow.
I am stunned. Not only is it a great poem; with words that move you to emotions I am not always happy to feel (but that's another long story!) But the pictures you have placed with it make me feel something too.
Amazing hun, totally amazing!
Posted 12 Years Ago
Hells bells...
That was... wow.
I am stunned. Not only is it a great poem; with words that move you to emotions I am not always happy to feel (but that's another long story!) But the pictures you have placed with it make me feel something too.
Amazing hun, totally amazing!
12 Years Ago
Wow thankyou.. such a great review
12 Years Ago
Totally meant, and always welcome x
Amazing. I enjoyed this so much, I read it multiple times... Very well penned and emotional.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Amazing. I enjoyed this so much, I read it multiple times... Very well penned and emotional.
12 Years Ago
you are so kind :))
12 Years Ago
Mahalo, and you are welcome. (lol, i've never said thanks and welcome in the same sentence before)
this one is really awesome
Posted 12 Years Ago
this one is really awesome
12 Years Ago
Thank you so much x
Magickal
Posted 12 Years Ago
Magickal
Nice piece Ruth. We often look, some seekers, and now and again there is a mutual glance.
Posted 12 Years Ago
Nice piece Ruth. We often look, some seekers, and now and again there is a mutual glance.
12 Years Ago
Thankyou John for taking the time out to review it :) Trust you are well
12 Years Ago
Hi Ruth, Yes just working and writing. What about you are you back yet?
12 Years Ago
next week im back
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