Inner Turmoil

Crossroads.. Panic.. confusion sit tight all will be revealed

             

When you reach the crossroads
Life tends to thrust you there
Poised and disorientated
Confused! Wavering! Unfair.

Confusion & lacerations congeal
You are suspended in eternity
Time to halt and reacquire
Ascend into your identity

Start searching your heart
Even the abyssal of the soul
Moving to one side of excitement
From its occupied agenda.. Must go!

It may not be imminent
Try to relax and deliberate
Breathing slowly as the pain
Begins to acutely mutate

There you will attain
A game plan, be gentle
Clarity is on the horizon
A truce is fundamental

The cloud of confusion
Begins to slowly divvy
Clarity passively emerges
Bringing with it assurity.

Author's Note

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Reviews

[Ahmad Cox]

So beautiful and so true. Its about seeing the peace through the storm. Very beautifully written.

[Bewitching Sensations]

thankyou Ahmad

[Forest Green]

Thematically meaningful and very nicely rhymed.

True to life...emphatically.

[Bewitching Sensations]

Thankyou Steel for your review

[Kelsey]

This is lovely. It gave me a sense of peace. It really makes you feel like everything will work out in the end. Great job. (:

[Bewitching Sensations]

Awww thankyou babe.. im so pleased :).. it will all work out for you x x

[John Alexander McFadyen]

No doubt you will find it

[Bewitching Sensations]

of course we all do in the end

[Crimson_Catastrophe]

A strong work.
Intensly relatable, because we all end up at crossroads at some point.

[Bewitching Sensations]

thankyou.. yes it comes to us all

[Dr. Wood ?]

Even as Neil Armstrong said.....In Life, one small step can become a giant leap..How many decisions do we take in one day? And how many of those decisions affect our lives forever?
You have put this into words so succinctly But CONGEALS should have no 'S'..If lacerations does

[Bewitching Sensations]

thankyou so much for your constructive review x

[The Refined Poet]

this is such a good poem. excellent poetic description of meeting a crossroad and having to make a decision. nicely done!

[Bewitching Sensations]

thank you Refined :)

[Belinda]

I love this, the way you describe your decision making. I hope you chose the path that made you happy. :)

[Bewitching Sensations]

Thankyou so much for your review.. yes i am on my way on that path now.. x x x x

[John Phoenix Hutchinson..]

Good that you have a game plan, I wish you well with it.
No longer clouds of confusion for you.

[Bewitching Sensations]

There is.. Thats just how it should be ;)