UntitledA Story by rutgersstudentThis is a sci-fi piece of writing that I started on a while back. I have the core story and message made (its about the nature of humanity) but am struggling a bit with the late-middle partResearcher’s Log
#0001: It is May 14th, 2303. The first of the ships has
launched, its destination being Earth-R, the Russian colony. Over the last
decade the preparations for Project Exodus have been made with excruciating
detail. When the United Nations Space Agency first discovered the cluster of 9
earth-like life-supporting planets, hope for the resolution of the world’s
problems started to matriculate in the leading scientists mind. With a planet
plagued by over population and constant wars for dwindling resources the
white-hairs at UNSA saw the cluster, nicknamed “Canaan” as their answer. Within
three years of finding “Canaan” the UNSA had conducted a series of tests,
“National Strength Index tests” were the official names but in reality very
little importance were put into these tests as the 9 nations chosen had also
been the 9 biggest funders of the UNSA and also the 9 biggest nations in the
world. The other nations were determined “gone without hope” and doomed to stay
on earth. USA, Russia, China, Mexico, The United Kingdom, Poland, Germany,
Italy, and South Africa were the 9 nations chosen to inhabit the 9 planets,
with each nation occupying their own planet. The planets were therefore named
Earth-A, Earth-R, Earth-C, Earth-M, Earth-U, Earth-P, Earth-G, Earth-I, and
Earth-S respectively. I have been assigned to join the United States colony
tasked to report back to the USNA the news and developments that occur on the
planet. It is with a hopeful heart that I embark on this flight, this exodus,
to a new life. Thomas Locke, UNSA Executive Researcher signing off. Researcher’s Log
#0002: The United States ship has landed on Earth-A, although five years
after launch date, establishing this day as Washington 1 0001 A.E. (After
Exodus). Because Earth-A doesn’t have the same annual cycle as our Earth does a
new dating system has been made to accommodate the new 400 day year of this
planet. The American government, under UNSA approval, has divided the calendar
into 10 months of 40 days with the months being named after the first ten
presidents of the Nation. Upon entering the orbit I noticed that there was two
distinctive features of our new home; the first being that there was about a
60-40 split in surface area between water and land. The second being that there
was only two large continents on this planet, however both were positioned in
such a way that the regions of the continents were approximately the same in
terms of percentage of equatorial area and polar area. After the landing was
first made the president of the nation, President Henry Wallace, devised a plan
for the colonization of the planet. The people who had lived in the northern
most states plus Hawaii and Alaska stayed on the current continent which the
President himself would reside. These peoples numbered around 500 million. The remaining
peoples, numbering around 550 million, would be moved to the other continent
where the vice president, Edward Smith, would reside. I believe this is a good
plan as the continents can bear the weight of these numbers with ease, however
I am skeptical of the separation in leadership, despite the fact the two men
have been friends since childhood and dreamed of running the country together
since their 10th birthdays when the two visited Washington D.C. for
the first time. I chose to rotate every
5 months-200 days- between the continents to be able to record accurately on
the American colony. Thomas Locke, UNSA Executive Researcher signing off. Researcher’s Log
#0003: I am coming to an end in my first stay on Wallace Continent, the new
name given to the land mass by the President himself. The city-building ability
of the Americans has yet again proven exemplary, as there have been three major
cities, out of an assortment of around a hundred, founded in the northernmost region, the
central region on the Eastern coast, and one in the south western part of the
continent. The Northernmost city, in the region the Americans have named “The
Tundra” is the city of Lincoln, named after the famed American president. This
city, due to its surrounding area, has become a major hub of mining as well as
timber production, with the majority of its 30 million residents working in
such industries. The eastern coastal city, the capital of the continent of the
Wallace continent and also the American nation, is named New Washington, an
homage to the capital on Earth. This city has become the leading trade city, as
its massive port, larger than any port back home, has allowed for massive trade
and booming commercial industries which many of its 50 million residents enjoy.
There is also the head of all political activities in the capital building,
which is a mirror image of the old one. The final of the three cities, the
western city, is named Capricornia, a name given for the major industry of the
city, which is agriculture and other foodstuff. This 27 million person city
sits in the middle of the fertile lands on the banks of the largest river on
the continent, Rodgers River (named after the captain of the Project Exodus
ship). I am extremely impressed in the infrastructure that has been put in
place on Wallace continent, however it leads me to wonder if such production is
being seen on the other planets in Canaan, and more importantly if there is on
Smith Continent. Thomas Locke, UNSA Executive Researcher signing off. Researcher’s log
#0004: It has been a week since I have landed on Smith Continent in their
capital city of New Los Angeles, a city on the western portion of the continent
on the coast, which in this aspect seems very similar to New Washington.
However this is one noticeable difference; New Los Angeles houses a little over
150 million people. This massive city, whose size and limits are almost akin to
the city-state, is, in my opinion, the result of an extremely subpar effort of
exploration and colonization. Edward Smith has seemed to occupy with the task
of cementing is authority, that the troubles of colonization have led him away
from such attempts. To my knowledge there is only one other major city on this
continent, Franklin, is located in the eastern part of the continent and
functions much like the city of Capricornia on Wallace continent. This city is
currently housing an estimate of around 80 million people. I am a little
disappointed in the progress on Smith continent, however it is far from
horrible as there is still an amble economy and road system for the current
time period. I have also received my first status update from the researchers
located on the other planets in Canaan. Poland, the United Kingdom, China,
Germany, and Italy have made similar progress as the Americans, with the
British seeming to be doing the best (colonization runs in their blood). South
Africa and Russia have both faced initial troubles, the landing sites seemed to
have malfunctioned for both nations and placed them in harsher climates in the
beginning. Worrisomely, Mexico seems to be struggling massively with their
separation of leadership, as their planet is made up of many island like
continents with a size similar to India. I do hope that all the planets, and
Smith continent for that matter, begin to find more ease in their colonization
efforts. However with our technology that we are possessed with today, I am
still optimistic. Thomas Locke, UNSA Executive Researcher signing off. Researcher’s log
#0005: President Wallace visited New Los Angeles today to check up on the
progress of his nation’s colonization effort on Smith continent. I was able to
stay in the room while Wallace and Smith discussed the efforts led by Smith.
Although Wallace was visibly upset with the foundation of only two megacities
and the lack of presence in the northern and southern ends of the continent,
the mood towards the two was still relaxed and amiable. After the serious
matters were covered the conversation shifted to childhood stories and memories.
The two have been through a lot together, as they have been together since
kindergarten. Growing up in North Dakota the two men were born to working class
families and often had to deal with the struggles of not having a lot of family
wealth. However, both exceeded in school and received full-academic
scholarships to Harvard University where the two would room together throughout
undergrad and law school. They were both
best man at each other’s wedding and godfathers to each other’s first born son.
After both men had been elected to congress, they rose to national fame when
they championed a bill that kept the military defense budget at the same level,
defending it against a massive cut. From there the men went on to run for
presidency and with a decisive win became the men in charge over the exodus of
the American people. The friendship between the two men, even on a completely
new planet filled with new troubles and stresses, seems to remain as strong as
it’s ever been. I believe these two men will be able to lead this country to a
prosperous new age on Planet-A. Thomas Locke, UNSA Executive Researcher signing
off. Researcher’s log
#0006: Today marks a year from L-day (landing day) and the nation- the
planet- is rejoicing in the festivities. President Wallace and Vice President
Smith appeared on a planet-wide broadcast where the two discussed the success
of the nation. The development of the large intracontinental road system for
both Wallace and Smith continent, the creation of the large space port that hovers
around the planet which is set to act as a both a weather tracking system and
also a hub for interplanetary travel, and the successful crop harvests on both
continents were the main topics of discussion. I was walking through the
streets of New Washington while the address was going one, being broadcasted
across the city, and I must note the extremely jubilant mood that was radiating
from the city and its residents. It is important to note that this year was not
only the first year that Americans have lived on a planet other than earth, but
also the first year that Americans have lived in a year without war in over 300
years. It appears to me that the goal of the UNSA is starting to be achieved, and
I am completely optimistic that it will be. Perhaps the thousand years of peace
humanity was promised did not require Christ to come back after all. Thomas
Locke, UNSA Executive Researcher signing off. Researcher’s log
#0007: Dismaying news came today from Planet-M, the Mexican colony. My
colleague, Miguel Dos Santos, informed the USNA that the Mexican colony has
split up into various “nations” with individual cartels claiming an
island-continent as their own land. The Mexican government still possess the
largest of the islands, the hub of the planet, but has been somewhat
unsuccessful in regaining the land from the cartels. The use of force has
occurred on the planet, and although there is no war there is still conflict
that the USNA didn’t want to see in their experiment. We are not sure how the
USNA is going to respond to this development, but we understand that a decision
will be made soon. I hope that this problem can be resolved quickly and the
Mexican planet can come under control once again. I am thankful that there has
been no such developments within the American colony, or on the other planets.
I am hopeful that the conflict will end quickly. Thomas Locke, UNSA Executive
Researcher signing off. Researcher’s log
#0008: I am coming to a close on my second stay on Wallace continent and I
am leaving the continent with much content for how things are going. The three
major cities are thriving and there have also been large increases in
production and residents in other cities like New Chicago, New Philadelphia,
and Polk City (named after past US President James K. Polk). There is also a
thriving suburban environment on the continent as well, something that had been
a trade mark of America in the 19th and 20th centuries.
Wallace, in a smart decision, has further divided the continent into 10 smaller
regions that were set up in the same manner as states were on earth. Within
these regions there is ten smaller regions that are also divided up in similar
manners as counties. The economy of the continent is also thriving, there have
been a few down periods but this is to be expected in the early stages of a new
colony. The most impressive thing about this colony however so far is that
there has been no conflict amongst the citizens in this colony, both within
this continent and also the other continent. I am very optimistic about the progress
of this colony and hopefully all of the other planets as well. We are still
waiting on news from the UNSA about Planet-M. Thomas Locke, UNSA Executive
Researcher singing off. Researcher’s log
#0009: The UNSA has sent all of the researchers their decision today. I
cannot say that I am surprised by this decision. “Due to the circumstances that
have arisen within the Mexican colony on Planet-M, the United Nations Space
Agency has been forced to take immediate action to save the integrity of
Project Exodus. It is for this reason that Planet-M has been kicked out of the
grouping of planets called Canaan, and therefore leaving Planet-M and the
Mexican colony out of the UNSA jurisdiction. Our reasoning in this is that the
Mexican nation was filled with internal turmoil for numerous years, therefore
excluding it from the test. The implementation of this decision will be
immediate. All funding and USNA assets on Planet-M, including researcher Miguel
Dos Santos, will be cut and removed from the planet immediately.” Researcher’s log
#XXXX: War has engulfed Planet-A. Once friends, family, and countrymen the
two factions, the Wallace Army and the Edward Army, send waves and waves of
young men and women to die. The warfare is bloody and horrific. Last week alone
the death toll from a battle in the eastern part of “The Tundra” surpassed
300,000 with the cold taking half as many as the bullets did. President Wallace
has sent me to the base of operations for the United America which is located in
the middle of the continent, hidden within the Freedom Mountain Range that
streaks down the center of Wallace continent like the spine of a human does to
their back. The President feels confident in a United America victory, and with
each new battle report his optimism rises and rises. With every battle report,
however, my pessimism increases. I believed that this grand project of the UNSA
would work, bringing not only peace and space to earth, but also bringing peace
and space to the other 9 planets of Canaan by only sending one country to each
planet. I truly believed that this would truly be the human race’s Canaan, just
as the original had been for the Hebrews. However my hope proved foolish. If
there is no enemy, man will make an enemy, even if that means fighting within
one’s own tribe/family/nation. I have witnessed a nation that was not only
proud of its nationalism, but also abundant in it, shoot bullets into
countrymen they used to sing the Star Spangled Banner with. I have seen best
friends lead millions of men and women against each other. I have seen man show
his true nature, his nature of war/anger/hate. Many, like me, believed that man
was good, that man could find a way, even if it meant leading the largest
exodus in human history, to end war. We were wrong. There is still war on
earth. There is still war on Planet-A. There is still war on every single
planet in Canaan. Every single one. There will always be war. There will never
be peace, so long as man exists. There will never be a true Canaan. Thomas,
USNA Executive Researcher signing off. © 2016 rutgersstudentAuthor's Note
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