Stronger.

She always tried her best, she always wanted to do the best for all people, she always wanted to be her best and she just wanted to be 'the one' in someone's life.

       She woke up every day, feeling hopeful, thinking that one day she would find the one who could make her feel great, happy and finally like a real girl and not just a person.

       She believed that the plans for her were bigger than she could think; she wanted something or someone able to notice her true colors.

       She had an open mind, a great smile and lots of hope, I guess she wasn't aware of the greatness in her maybe because in her life everyone told her she was never good enough or maybe life taught her that.

       When she was seventeen she was already hopeless, everything changed in her, she was the same girl but she had lost her faith, her hope in a great future, she tried to commit suicide twice but I'm sure there was someone who helped her, the only one who wanted to.

       I don't really know how she overcame  that, but two weeks ago I saw her, she was running in the park with two kids, laughing and minutes later I saw a man coming in her direction and the only thing I heard was " let's go darling, the kids need to rest and so do we"

       I'm not trying to say every story is like this one, maybe you're just supposed to be the one who suffers the most, but remember God gives the hardest battles to His best soldiers.

 

  

Reviews

[Coyote Poetry]

I agree with the logic of the story. Hard times and struggle can lead us to the right places. Sometime we must reach the lowest point to know where we need to be. Thank you for sharing the story. I was glad it had a happy ending.
Coyote

[Rute Santos]

Thank you :D

[Catlen]

Inspiring...Lovely...
Thanks for sharing

[Rute Santos]

Thank you :D

[J. J. Nightingale]

I would change "every people" to all people ..

There are a few run on sentences here..

But all in all .. I understand your words ...

Wondering who "She is" .............. Jazz :)

[Rute Santos]

I'm sorry, English is my second language and I understand i'm not in my best sorry :) This story was kind of inspired in me , I really identify myself with her but there are a lot of things that I just made up. :)

[J. J. Nightingale]

Well .. it's quite good ... :)

[Rute Santos]

thank you :))

[Bobbie Coelho]

A lovely story, full of hope for the future

[Rute Santos]

thank you :D

[Angel]

Oh, I do love a happy ending...

[Rute Santos]

And so do I :D

[Nwanna Onyeka Benedict]

That's a true talk. Our suffering is to his glory. Nice piece.

[Rute Santos]

I'm really happy you liked it :D

[Neon]

Life brings every-thing with the time. Love brings peace in everyone's life to make the life bright, colorful and delight. Some-times 'love' needs 'Rest', some-times 'Life' desires something special to make an impact on love making it more stronger for forever. This story has really touched my 'Heart'.

Yes! If there's such kinda story occurs in real-life then the world'd be in 'Peace' and the people'd enjoy the brightness of 'life' with the 'scent' of 'Heart' but 'Un-fortunately' it never happens in reality yeh, may be sometimes it does but mostly it doesn't coz .. in reality, in this today's life people love giving 'Pain' right into the depth of the heart of someones who care much about the feelings of someones...

...anyway I really loved this story as well. You've a great perception about love and of course about the life. Your skills're 'Marvelous' .. keep writing! Your really good at writing. I loved this story, it's such a delightful and a magnificent write that's touched my heart.


Keep smiling!

[Rute Santos]

I completely agree with you, it doesn't happen in real life as many times as we can think, but thank you so much, your opinion is very important to me :D

[Neon]

Ha! Yup! Your welcome, beautiful eyes! ;P
Well...your this story's really damn marvelous and let everyone go think themselves about the lives that what's actually a life is! So, this story's fantasic fantastic ... I love the theme, you've a great talent, Beautiful eyes!

Keep writing and never give up!
Your handsome, "Neon" is always with ya! Ha!

[Rute Santos]

Thank you so much :D

[Sami Khalil]

God does not gove a soul to bear more than its capacity for He knows our power and weak points.Some people have more resolve and patience than others . The greatest enemy is within which is your ego and the evil side of you you should win the battle to the best of your ability with the help of God of course...Bravo

[Rute Santos]

Thank you so much :D

[Sami Khalil]

You are welcome...:).........................

[emmajoy]

Life is so often like that: starts hopeful, goes into a nose.dive then slowly, slowly begins an upward movement into happiness and such. It's called perseverance into survival. What a wonderful piece of writing, clearly put in what i think is a second language, has both a moral and spiritual point at the end. Tis a post with many colours. Great last phrase!

[Rute Santos]

Thanks a lot for ou comment , glad you liked it :D