He said.

"Stop crying" - I said to myself. The tears were all over my face, I just looked at him and he asked me "What's wrong?", I looked at him, he seemed really worried.

I really wanted to tell him but my hands were cold just like my heart and I just couldn't so I said "I'm fine".

 When I thought he was going to say "Ok" he looked right into my eyes, held my hands and said "No, you're not"

Reviews

[Neon]

Aww .. so emotional scene .. i hope everything's settle down now and your cool. Love's what that keeps someone in the heart and fear of breaking the heart through of love always tears everyone apart those who fall in love...
Wish you luck for your life .. Life's beautiful, pretty .. if some events occur in life and rip the heart off then just try giving some time to yourself and sit alone to think about "What's next" ... !
Because .. life doesn't stop .. the world doesn't come end when love gives some pain in heart .. just love the life happily and try to be strong .. At an every step you''ll find something new to do with some happiness :)

[Valeriya Nahirnyak]

You got me curious about what you were trying to say to him ...

[Rute Santos]

Maybe I'll write a final for this story and then I'll let you know :)

[Valeriya Nahirnyak]

Ty ! I'm looking forward to that (:

[Tennessee]

Short but good. I think you could use more detail, it would really make it pop more. I like how you lead into the story and brought your emotion into it. Good work :)

[Rute Santos]

thanks a lot :D

[Tom]

Better to come out with it and say what's on your mind, even if it is you don't love him anymore !

A thoughtful story but it needs a conclusion !

[Rute Santos]

ok I'll try to write it thanks :)