White pony

There was no white pony

No need to scale walls

No dragons breathing vengance 

No tyrant in the halls

There wasn't any war

No ships to lay siege

No witches steaming caldron 

No handsome faithful liege

No triumphant fateful battle

No hairy monster mess

No long rides in the saddle

No never ending quest

No longer does it matter

Because its no longer real

Our fairy tale ended

.... but trust this

Our fair tale was real.

Reviews

[Lily Mae]

I could feel this to my bones.. Sometimes people can walk away and not look back.. Maybe it wasn't real to them. .but it is and or was real to you.. Again... great ink..:)

[allie_arrowz]

is the last line not supposed to say fairy?
for some reason, my favorite part is where you demand trust.
this has inspired me.
thanks! haha.

[EMF]

What a cracking poem... or possibly a song. I really don't know. The beat and flow are so good. I loved it. Some truly class work here that just leaps off the page and begs to be re-read

[Rusty]

Thanks.

[Samuel Dickens]

This reminds me of two old folk songs--"Puff the Magic Dragon", and "Autumn to May", both of which tell a similar story. You've got some great lines, here, and the rhymes are magnificent.