Singularity

I don't think of you any more

I don't think of you any less

You are my singularity of reference

You are my constant I must confess

Has it been a good morning

Has it been a good afternoon

Will you be acknowledging my presence

Will I hear from you soon

I hope this note finds you refreshed

I hope that the ocean whispers my name

I hope that you swoon in thoughts of me

No matter what I will love you just the same

Take a moment of this day and remember

Today remember the longing in my eyes

Tomorrow my ghost will visit you strongly

Today I will be remembered in your sighs

I don't think of you anymore

I don't think of you any less

You are my singularity of reference

My constant thought I must confess

Author's Note

This is a series of single sentences to be sent each day to your lover. As the days move the poem forms. Try it. I also incorporated the word thighs because I was dared by a friend to.

Reviews

[Dean Kuch®]

Wow Rusty, you snared me and reeled me in with the first two amazing lines in this beautiful piece of work! I'm also glad that you used the word 'SIGHS', instead of 'THIGHS'. This was too wonderful to bring down to that level, friends dares be damned, lol!

[Emilie Barn]

A beautiful piece of words. Now it's one of my favourite ones. A poem with true feelings. It's really sweet. Keep it up =))

[Mashairi]

Beautiful piece. I love it, well done :)

[Rosalind Gale]

I do believe that incorporating 'thighs' is always a good thing, anytime. I enjoyed the rhyme as others have - though when the rhyme 'appeared' to trip up, I liked it even more. Predictability can be death, for me at least. I like also the simple, loving sentiments therein. Thank you Rusty.

Rosa -x-

[Lily Mae]

I love the true and raw emotion..and who hasn't experienced this type of feeling.. pushing away with all you have to have it right in your face again the next day.. Love is a powerful thing..x

[Liderien]

heartbreaking...

[Emerald Seas]

Your suggestion is quite intriguing! "Thighs" caught me a little off guard, and in another context I think would be more fitting. Here, in this poem, it feels like a stressed thought to me. Otherwise, I enjoyed the writing very much, and a great idea for someone that has a lover that would appreciate the gesture.

[olla]

I like this for the most part.. the rhyme sort of broke down for me at "I hope this note finds you refreshed" but I still enjoyed where you went with the concept you began with "I don't think of you any more.."

[Lumière Dé..]

It's sweet.... I got a bit confused when you said 'thighs'. I was like 'Does he mean......Nawwwwwww he wouldn't........ would he O.o' But yeah, other than that it's very romantic

[afra]

wowwww....i enjoyed reading it ....i love it ...one of my fav poems ..=)