i

i

 

the word i use the most

 

an i

 

for an i

 

talking of us

 

u

 

extracted promises from me

 

cancelled the contact

 

then set me free

 

to live in these chains

 

set me free

 

to die once again

 

raising lazerus us

 

to do his dance

 

something

 

i

 

cannot turn away from

 

something

 

i

 

cannot see

 

i

 

me

Reviews

[Emilie Barn]

It's so beautiful... I enjoyed reading it. Great job. Keep it up =))

[Liderien]

This is beautiful my sweet...

[allie_arrowz]

ooh interesting, i like "canceled the contract then set me free"

[eglantine]

Kabam--this is your best writing that I have read so far. I'm def going to look forward to see this evolve and hope you write more like this--seems like you've truly found a singular voice here.

[Rusty]

Thank You

[...]

. wow ... in hinduism they say ... "aham bramhasmi" meaning i am the universe ... each of us represents a universe ... uniqueness, individuality, specificity ... the works ... and then when we interact with another universe ... things happen ... to change the i ... sometimes for the better and sometimes for the worse ... yet the i keeps evolving ... it takes a tiny step forward every day ... just my thoughts after reading this amazing piece of poetry ...