Small frames

Glass and sticks

Rocks and bricks

Pins and pricks

All in small frames

Mortar and doors

Streets that were yours 

Moving too quick

Clouds getting thick

Rubbish and waste

Joyful malaise

Freudian slip

Slaps on the wrist

Joy's happy pain

The mention of name

Your memory remains

All in small frames

Reviews

[MOON]

Clever and concise . Lovely write.

[Emerald Seas]

A lot is being said in this quick, witty write.

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. ah ... fascinating word play, dear poet ... if i were an oxymoron, i would be smiling at your talent ... but i haven't missed the intensity of expression either ... there's a visual sense to expressing this loss ... "your memory remains" ... "all in small frames" ... to me ... is about taking that aerial view ... zooming out and seeing the world and different spans of time in "small frames" ... since you are a pilot, i can't help but imagine this piece that way ... i could be wrong ... either way, this is an extremely succinct piece of writing and i loved it ... brevity is not my forte but i do find myself wishing that it was ...

[emmajoy]

For some reason this has the ring of a puzzle to me.. you know: work out the phrasing. see what you can find. The brevity has its own music, metre rhythmic and an ending almost enigmatic. We all see and feel things differently.

[K-mo]

this is wonderfully written!

[Liderien]

i really love this. so simple yet has depth to it. You're so witty!