Midnight swim

Kicking pools of light from my toes.

Gentle sweet current the phosphorus glows

Brimy salt water laps at my nose

Midnight swim can't see where it goes.

Reviews

[writing mojo]

the word choice is prime, and conscience, perfect imagery at the lapping of thought provoking, brought into inquisition light of a situation .. good stuff

[Rusty]

This is the beginning of something that steeps within...